Comments I posted on other students blogs
"Looks exactly like the example. I would suggest coming up with an original layout and format, something that would exude the feel of the game you are pitching. For example, since its capture the flag, then your title banners could be a blue-to-red gradient, evoking the image of the two teams competing against each other."
http://aweitzner-gdd110.blogspot.com/2014/02/blog-post_8390.html#comment-form
"I'm not sure if the fact the game involves strategy is enough basis for the statement comparing the game to chess. The formatting is near identical to the example, and it would help if you included an image."
http://aweitzner-gdd110.blogspot.com/2014/02/blog-post_8390.html?showComment=1392619238154#c1764460304635914824
"Im not sure what operating system you are using, but it is better to take a direct screenshot of a document via the computer and save it to an imaging editor software than to take a photo of the screen itself. Doing so makes the font much harder to read. I would also advise that you add an image. "
http://mbfishman-gdd110.blogspot.com/2014/02/game-pitch-hide-and-seek.html#comment-form
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