Good use of an image. Your pitch being 2 pages could be possibly harmful; you may want to condense because these are supposed to be short and concise. You could add color, sub headings, your name, and center the title. Even mention that it is a pitch.
I like the image. Although, it isn't clear whether this is a game pitch or a summary of how to play chess, that problem can easily be solved with a title that provides the needed clarity. Also, try to keep it within one page. This can be done by resizing and repositioning the image.
Good use of an image. Your pitch being 2 pages could be possibly harmful; you may want to condense because these are supposed to be short and concise. You could add color, sub headings, your name, and center the title. Even mention that it is a pitch.
ReplyDeleteI like the image. Although, it isn't clear whether this is a game pitch or a summary of how to play chess, that problem can easily be solved with a title that provides the needed clarity. Also, try to keep it within one page. This can be done by resizing and repositioning the image.
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